Friday, July 24, 2020
I went biking in the holidays and I went over two big breakers and I was tired. have you got over to breakers before.
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Hi my name is Dev kumar and I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I like your bike so much because it looks so good and so cool and it is fun to go biking in the holidays. I also want a bike like your's because it is a nice bike. Maybe sometime later you can comment on my blog later http://wpsdevk.blogspot.com/ this a link of my blog. Maybe next time you could write a bit more about biking and Biking is fun. Blog you later!
ReplyDeleteHi Jayden. This blog post is a really cool thing to talk about. I love biking around loads of different places and I can see why you would want to talk about this. I have seen that you have spelled some words wrong in this post so maybe you should check your words to fix them up and add more writing to it. Keep up some of the cool things to talk about and remember keep blogging!
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